Correção de texto: Jorge's appearance impressed his...

A aparência de Jorge impressionava conhecidos: era um homem de cerca de 2 metros de altura, pele morena, 40 anos e ainda e com um físico do tempo em que praticava alpinismo. Herdara a altura do pai alemão, que engravidara sua mãe num carnaval e retornara à Alemanha sem saber da gravidez. Nunca mais foi visto, e Jorge recebera apenas o sobrenome da mãe.
– Boa tarde, Jorge! Está com uma expressão de felicidade hoje – Saudou uma vizinha mulata, que estava a uma janela.
Jorge não podia deixar de ouvir o som alto de música gospel que partia da casa da vizinha. Devolveu a saudação e explicou o motivo da felicidade:
– Boa Tarde, Dona Adeílza! Estou feliz, porque talvez eu consiga aumentar a minha renda – destrancou o portão com uma chave.


The Jorge`s appearance impressed his acquaintances: he was a man of about 2 meters tall, dark-skinned, 40 years old and still with a physical of the times that when he practiced climbing. He inherited the height from his German father, who became pregnant his mother in the carnival; he returned to Germany unaware of the pregnancy. She was never seen him again. Jorge received only the mother's surname.
– Good afternoon, Jorge! You are with a happy expression today – welcomed a mulatta neighbor, who was in a window.
Jorge cannot fail to hear the loud sound of gospel music from the neighboring house. He returned the salute and explained the reason to be happy:
– Good afternoon, Mrs. Adeílza! I'm happy because maybe I can increase my income – unlocked the gate with a key.
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The Jorge`s (no article before names) appearance impressed his acquaintances: he was a man of about 2 meters tall (or a two-meter-tall man) dark-skinned, 40 years old and still with a physical (or body/shape) of the times that when he practiced climbing. He inherited the height from his German father, who became got his mother pregnant his mother in the carnival; he returned to Germany unaware of the (her) pregnancy. She was has never seen him again. Jorge received only the mother's surname.
– Good afternoon, Jorge! You are with a happy expression today – welcomed a mulatta neighbor, who was in a by the window.
Jorge cannot fail to hear the loud sound of gospel music from the neighboring house. He returned replied the salute greeting and explained the reason to be happy:
– Good afternoon, Mrs. Adeílza! I'm happy because maybe I can increase my income – unlocked the gate with a key.

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