Correção de texto: Love

First of all, the love is the thing most precious in we life, there are many kinds of love, brotherly love, familiar love and love between couples.
By the way, we should valuing the people's love. With this in mind, the respect is fundamental value so that there is love.
Speaking of that, nowadays the people doesn't know love and respect another people, causing many cases of violence, this is very bad.
Actually, everybody need to elevate the love in your heart, because the love is the solution to many kinds of problems.
Therefore, we should in the opposite way of societ, we should distribute love to another people, this is very importante.
Finally, without love everyone will be lost, because only love can be save the world.

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Thais, aí vão algumas sugestões para melhorar seu text em inglês.

Dica:
Cuidado com o uso excessivo do artigo THE porque ele não deve ser usado como o usamos em português.

Geralmente em inglês as frases são bem mais concisas do que em inglês. Por isso que eu coloquei um dividi algumas delas em duas -

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Actually, Everybody needs to elevate thebuild more love in your their heart. This is because the love is the solution to many kinds of problems.

Therefore, we should in the opposite way of societ go against the tide in society. We should distribute share our love with other people. This is very important.

Finally, without love everyone will wouldbe lost, because only love canbesave the world.
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