Correção de texto: My Dear Journal

Dear Journal,

Sometimes God teaches us a lesson when we least expect it. Yesterday I was to come into one of the entrance doors at the mall when I saw a blind young man who like me was walking towards the same door. But she passed by the door without noticing it.
I thought I might help her so I walked in her direction and offered to guide her until the mall’s corridor. She accepted my help and we came into the door. We went through “Lojas Americanas”.
During our brief walk together, I informed her where we were. And she just said that she wanted to go to the mall. At the end of our walk I told her: “Now we left the shop and you are at the corridor of the mall”. She thanked me and walked away in a very confident way holding her blind stick.
I just could think “What a brave woman”. To get to the mall, she got the bus by herself and walked alone till the entrance door which is a bit far from the bus stop. I was amazed by her courage.
I learned a lesson from this episode. I must be brave like this woman. I should overcome my limits and deficiencies in the English language. I ought to believe that even knowing rubbish English I am able to improve my abilities to take my exams.
I have to remember and believe that “Vouloir c’est pouvoir” , “Where there’s a will there’s a way”, “Volere è potere”…. If I keep this sort of quote in mind, I shall be able to achieve my goals.
Of course, I need to work very hard with strong determination and bold willingness.
I think to sit for CAE I will have to study like people who apply for a public job:
Studying, studying, studying and studying.
My new motto now in life now.

Thanks
Ana