Correção de texto: "On the road"

Olá, criei uma história para praticar inglês. Se puderem corrigir:

Anna and Maria are into their blue car, and they have a conversation. They are traveling to Chicago. It´s their first travel and they are so excited. The trunk is full of things, many bags and clothes. But Maria just carried with her one bag, a big, red, bag. It´s a long travel to Chicago, the road is full of cars, a intense traffic.

Anna says to Maria: I hate traffic! Look at that yellow car! It´s insane!
Maria says: Hey, do not worry! It´s up to me! Trust me! We go to get at there in the right time!
Anna asks to Maria: What time is the show? Twenty two o´clock?
Maria: I guess it is! Oh! What´s the right direction? Left or right?
Anna: I guess it´s left! Hey, wait! Let me see this map! Yeah, turn left! We´re close to the Cassino Show!
Maria: I think we´re wrong! We past the Cassino Show! What do you think Anna?
Anna: I don´t know! Look at the parking! I think it´s the Cassino Show´s parking!
Maria: Oh! Let me park this car, and then we check it!