Correção de Texto: Road rage

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Everything allegedly started with a road rage and ended up with a murder case. The suspect followed the victim to hers house where a shooting occourred. According to witnessess the suspect knew the victim before. Police is investigating the case to find out if the crime has occurred because of the road rage or if there are some unkown fight between them that may caused the crime. Neighbours are outraged for the crime that has occoured in a good and calm community.

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Everything, allegedly, started with road rage and ended up as a murder case. The suspect followed the victim to her house where a shooting occurred. According to some witnesess the suspect already knew the victim. Police investigating the case are trying to establish if the crime was directly caused by the road rage or if there was some unknown dispute between them that may caused the crime. Neighbours are outraged because the crime happened in their good and calm community.
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