Correção de texto: Pay and benefits

Hi guys, I am doing an essay about business and I am trying to set up sentences with the words I am learning as soon as they come to my mind, that's why the text doesn't make much sense. Here it goes:
White-collar jobs are the ones that you usually work in an office or at a bank. They are generally 9 to 5 jobs. Some companies do increments from time to time. When we search for a job in a certain job, we have to analize all the pros and cons of that job and if it suits our needs.

Many workers may resent with the company management because they don't feel that they are being valued, despite the hardworking they've been done.

When it comes to group's work,it's very important that all people pull their weight in the work.

If you are a very well-skilled worker,myour bargaining power is high, because you are the kind of worker that companies want to join them nowadays.
As you can see guys, this text is messed up, but what I'd really like to know is if my writing skill is good. Thank you very much!

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