Correção de texto: Some words about tornadoes

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I was reading a notice few times ago in Atlanta Times that left me a little intrigued, it’s an old history about tornadoes but I thought interesting because I never imagined the big amount of tornadoes touch down in North American cities, something about 1,200 storms a year, just a little of those are really dangerous, however others can cause a great damage, reaching for example 200 mph, the number 5 in scale.
The big problem about storms and tornadoes is those can’t be provided in an acceptable time, necessary to evacuate a city for example, It’s the why we ever see a lot of people dying when they are hitted.
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wender.jean escreveu:Pessoal, estou voltando a estudar após algum tempo parado, tive a ideia de escrever um texto sobre novos conceitos e palavras que eu vou aprendendo por aqui e gostaria da opinião de vocês, sugestões e melhorias.

I was reading a notice few times ago in Atlanta Times that left me a little intrigued, it’s an old history about tornadoes but I thought interesting because I never imagined the big amount of tornadoes touch down in North American cities, something about 1,200 storms a year, just a little of those are really dangerous, however others can cause a great damage, reaching for example 200 mph, the number 5 in scale.
The big problem about storms and tornadoes is those can’t be provided in an acceptable time, necessary to evacuate a city for example, It’s the why we ever see a lot of people dying when they are hitted.



I was reading a note on the Atlanta times a while ago that got me intrigued, it's an old story about tornadoes, which I thought was interesting because I had never imagined the great amount of tornadoes that touch down in North American cities, around 1,200 storms every year, in which only a few of these actually pose any treat to the people, however others can have wind gusts reaching 200mph, ( 5 in scale ) causing extensive damage. The big problem with storms and tornados is that we can't predict exactly when it's going to happen, making it nearly impossible to warn people well in advance in order for a city to be evacuate for example. That's why people get killed when they are hit by these storms/tornados.

Uns errinhos só, no mais ótimo. Keep studying :P