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Guns n' Roses is a rock band that I like it, and recently,they came to the Events Center to hold a concert.
Everything was wonderful, because they played the best songs as November Rain, You can't put yours arms around a memory, and mainly, the three musics that I love most: Welcome to the jungle, Patience and Sweet child o' mine, that were the most exciting . So the concert was amazing, but I only didn't like the it started late.
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Guns n' Roses is a rock band that I like it, and recently,they recently came to perform at the Events Center (in my city) to hold a concert.
Everything was wonderful, because as they played their best most memorable songs such as November Rain, You can't put yours arms around a memory, and mainly and particularly because they've played the three songs musics that I love the most: Welcome to the jungle, Patience and Sweet child o' mine, that these were the most exciting ones. So Overall the concert was amazing, but I only didn't like the it I just didn't enjoy the fact that it started late.

Abraço!