Correção de texto "There is a high contrast..."

pedroalpha 10
Correct my grammar, please.

"There is a high contrast in how private and public spaces are seen in the countries analyzed in this lecture. A public space is open and accessible to all citizens. Yet How far does the frontier between the public and the private go?
It was said that americans are highly individualistic; the cause of it might be that americans overvalue the private rather than the public. Which is different in other cultures, because of the different interpretations of the topic."
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Flavia.lm 3960 1 9 90
Hi Pedro

1 - "Americans" --> use capital letter

2 - It seems that the last sentence is a continuation of the previous one. You'd better not separate them, use only a coma.

(...) than the public, which is different in other cultures (...)

Henry Cunha 10070 3 16 179
Olá Pedro

Utilizando o que já foi dito...

Sua versão:

"There is a high contrast in how private and public spaces are seen in the countries analyzed in this lecture. A public space is open and accessible to all citizens. Yet How far does the frontier between the public and the private go?
It was said that americans are highly individualistic; the cause of it might be that americans overvalue the private rather than the public. Which is different in other cultures, because of the different interpretations of the topic."

Sugestões:

"There is a high contrast in how private and public spaces are seen in the countries analyzed in this lecture. A public space is open and accessible to all citizens. Yet, how far does the frontier between the public and the private go?
It was said that Americans are highly individualistic, the cause of which might be that Americans overvalue the private rather than the public. This preference differs from that of other cultures, because of the different interpretations of the topic."

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