Correção do texto em inglês: The Corruption

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The Corruption

Nowadays, brazilian people are wroth with the corruption of the politicians. Why there is too much corruption in the government? I think it is just the reflection of the brazilian's behavior. Who have never seen someone parking on a prohibited space? Who have never seen someone breaking the law? In my opinion, first we have don't be corrupt and after we can claim about the government corruption.
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The Corruption

Nowadays, brazilian people are wroth with the corruption of the politicians. Why there is too much corruption in the government? I think it is just the reflection of the brazilian's behavior. Who have never seen someone parking on a prohibited space? Who have never seen someone breaking the law? In my opinion, first we have don't be corrupt and after we can claim about the government corruption.


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The Corruption

Nowadays, Brazilian people are furious at the corruption of the politicians. Why is there too much corruption in the government? I think it just reflects the Brazilian people's behavior. Who has never seen someone parking in a prohibited space? Who has never seen someone breaking the law? In my opinion, first we should not be corrupt and then we can complain about the government corruption
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Nowadays, Brazilian people are wroth with the corruption of politicians. Why is there too much corruption in the government? I think it is just the reflection of the Brazilian's behavior. Who has never seen someone parking on a prohibited space? Who has never seen someone breaking the law? In my opinion, people in Brazil should try to be more honest before complaining about the government corruption.
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Thanks Carls and doney mendonça!