Correção do Texto "Three Things That I Would Like To Do"

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Three Things That I Would Like To Do

There are three thinks that I would like to do before to die. The first is travel by plan. This, I realized in this year. It was amazing! The second is sky diving. This will be a little difficult, because I'm very afraid of heights. Finally, the third thing is to drink a big cup of Yakult. One day I will do it!
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Avatar do usuário Donay Mendonça 49115 21 73 1138
Algumas sugestões de correção:

There are three things that I would like to do before I die. The first one is to travel by plane and I already did that this year. It was amazing! The second one is skydiving. This will be a little difficult because I'm very afraid of heights. Finally, the third thing is to drink a big cup of Yakult. One day I will do it!



Bons estudos!
Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thanks!
Avatar do usuário Gustavo Sena 185 4
Hello draylson,I think I can help you this time!
I am not any teacher,By the way,a make mistakes all day long but...

In your first phrase you mistake:

´´Before to die´´ is completely wrong ´cause this word is a preposition,and preposition sequence a verb,you have to use the ing.

Prepositions and Exemples:

PREPOSITION + VERB + ING

Like (Option) I like traveling (Correct)
I like to travel (Correct)

We use more frequently ´´TO´´ after ´´Like´´ But Both are correct!

Enjoy:I enjoy playing!
Stop:We all stopped watching TV!
Finish:They finished doing the lesson
Mind:I won´t mind getting up early on weekends!
Cosider:Would you consider living in a shelter?
Avoid:I avoid eating a lot!
After:After studying I´ll have a good time!
Before:Before dying She said ´´I leave all my money for my dog´´ (rsrsrs)
in:She is not interested in reading anymore
of:I don´t see a way of surviving anymore
without:I can´t sleep without putting my pajama!
About:I want to know about studying English!
For:I received a Prize for doing the best action film!
By:She can impress them by doing tricks!

Another thing that may help you

For Exemple:

We can´t say ´´I want to play scuba diving´´
We say:I want to go scuba diving!

All the sports that finish with ING you´ll Use Go!

I hope I´ve helped you!

Bye! :(
Avatar do usuário draylson 15
Thank you Gustavo. You have helped me a lot. :-)
I will study about it.