The Social Network (The Movie) - Summary

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That is the story about a guy called Mark who had an idea to create a website. Firstly the people at his university started to use it, and then the website became famous in a short period of time, now it’s used by hundreds of millions of people worldwide.
The movie portrays that all the success of the facebook (the name of the website) makes Mark forget about the people that helped him to make his idea come true.
Eduardo, Mark’s best friend, helped him with money in the beginning of the project, and three other guys gave Mark the idea for the social network. Now that people brought Mark to justice.
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This is the story about a guy called Mark who had an idea to create a website. Firstly, the people at his university started to use it, and then the website became famous in a short period of time, now it’s used by hundreds of millions of people worldwide.
The movie portrays that all the success of Facebook (the name of the website) makes Mark forget about the people that helped him to make his idea come true.
Eduardo, Mark’s best friend, helped him with money at the beginning of the project, and three other guys helped Mark with the idea for the social network. Now those people are bringing Mark to justice.