Correção de diálogo: New restaurant

Estava praticando um pouco de inglês e gostaria que vocês o corrigissem e disessem o que acharam dele. Obrigada!

It was Saturday, and Taylor was so weary. But, suddenly, he had an idea. Taylor remembered that a new restaurant was opened in your city. So, he decided to invite all his best friends to go there. Then, he goes up stairs and called to Jane:
Jane: Hello! Who´s there?
Taylor: Hi! It´s Taylor!
Jane: Oh! My dear!
Taylor: I´d like to know if you´ll are busied this night. ´Cause I´d like to go to the restaurant with you.
Jane: What´s cool! I´m in!
Taylor: Ok! But I will invite Lisa and Paul too. Do you have some problem about it?
Jane: Of course not!
Taylor:Ok! See you soon!
Jane: Ok! Bye, bye!