Correção de review of a Game demo

Hi folks.

I made a review of game demo on steam and I want to write it in English.

My opinion to developer.

The graphic game are excellent, the history seems to be really good.
But a have some doubts about the mix of things that turn the game seems to be in hard mode,
He's freezing and heating too easy, when the battery is depleted he's practically condemned
To death and, of course, add to it enemies. A think the battery is a big problem, people will get in
Trouble with they lost too much time in the quests, with the battery discharged he cannot eat or drink, its not fair.
Maybe if the game is not too long, its not a great problem, but if is was, people could be find them
Selves a little frustrate.

The game needs check point and more saves, it would be good.
Well, I played I think 3 or 4 hours and this is my first impression but I have to play more and
I will let you now my next impression.

Agradeço a atenção de vocês.