Correção de texto: Beggar
Beggar?
On a very cold morning, about eight o’clock when I went to work! I was passing through the small tunnel when a saw the man wrapped in his coat at the bottom of the tunnel. He may not has been very old, but he looked has been badly treated by life and time. His Stony-faced, sad and silent couldn’t leave nobody that passed though that path untouched. He had in front of him a bowl with few coins inside. He looked at me and I could see that he was smiling wanly, His eyes were poll of loneliness and sadness. I kept trying to tell myself, “Don’t pity him. He don’t want that, he don’t need that, and he will know it at once if I do. He is not victim, he is people”!
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On a very cold morning, about eight o’clock when I went to work! I was passing through the small tunnel when a saw the man wrapped in his coat at the bottom of the tunnel. He may not has been very old, but he looked has been badly treated by life and time. His Stony-faced, sad and silent couldn’t leave nobody that passed though that path untouched. He had in front of him a bowl with few coins inside. He looked at me and I could see that he was smiling wanly, His eyes were poll of loneliness and sadness. I kept trying to tell myself, “Don’t pity him. He don’t want that, he don’t need that, and he will know it at once if I do. He is not victim, he is people”!
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