Correção de texto em inglês sobre "Adolescence"

The phase of adolescence is one of the stages most difficult of our lives. It is when we begin to realize many of the problems of life, when we left to be children and we started to look to the world in a completely different way.
At this stage we have the best years of our life but also the worst.
The biggest problems that we have to face are the loss of friends, that when you most need to collapse with someone you seem that you are alone in the world. Start dating, we believe that we have found a ideal person, our soul mate, our first love, the best feeling that anyone can try, and as if we were to live a dream, but after all this ends and there it seems that our lap also all over.
Then we started to be different from the other, hearing different songs, not wearing the same types of clothes and we have begun to be victims of bullying. Also our family begins to have problems, parents start to discuss and eventually divorce, grandparents die…or at home can we be happy. We started to be alone and depressive, without anyone to talk about, we seem that the whole world is against us. And we still have the pressure at school, with work, tests, exams….
But in spite of all this is the moment of our life where we have new experiences, and a stage in which we live the things of an intense manner, but eventually move on and then we realized as we grow before all these problems.
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The phase of adolescence is one of the most difficult stages of our lives. It is when we begin to realize many of the problems of life, when we are no longer children and we start to look to the world in a completely different way.
At this stage, we have the best years of our life but also the worst.
The biggest problems that we have to face are the loss of friends, as when you most need to collapse with someone it seems that you are alone in the world. Start dating, we believe that we have found an ideal person, our soul mate, our first love, the best feeling that anyone can experience, and as if we were to live a dream, but after all this ends and there it seems that our lap also all over.
Then we start to be different from the others, listening to different songs, not wearing the same types of clothes and we begin to be victims of bullying. Also our family begins to have problems, parents start to discuss and eventually divorce, grandparents die…or at home can we be happy. We started to be alone and depressive, without anyone to talk about, it seems that the whole world is against us. And we still have the pressure at school, with work, tests, exams….
But in spite of all this is the moment of our lives where we have new experiences, and a stage in which we live things in an intense way, but eventually move on and then we realize as we grow before all these problems.