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Today I have an English class at Minds. I'm at unit fourteen! My English vocabulary is poor but I want to learn more. I have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquial vocabulary.
I like English so much and I want to be really fluent. But I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner. It's frustrating. I feel very stupid. Now, I going to take a shower and get ready for class.
Bem-vindo(a) ao fórum!
Donay and Uaisatou,
I would like to suggest a couple of very minor improvements to the above post, please see my rewrite below, and compare it with Donay's correction, then determine why
I made the changes that I did. If you have any questions please let me know.Today I have an English class at Minds, where I am in unit fourteen, but my English vocabulary is still poor and I want to learn more. I also have a little difficulty with grammar rules and colloquical vocabulary.
I like English very much and want to be really fluent, but I think it will take some time. All my friends know languages well and I'm a beginner, so I'm frustrated and feel very stupid.
Now, I am going to take a shower and get ready for class.
One thing to consider is that I have combined several grammatically correct short simple sentences with a common thread to make complex sentences.
Again please let me know your honest thoughts, and perhaps I can assist you in your studies.