Correção de texto: Enviromental Issues

Surely there are many things going on which harm the nature. Without nutue resources we're incapable to survive, so we gotta perceive ourselves in a diferente way, I mean, everybody ought to do their own requirements. Putting trash on the right garbage, saving water, etc. These two topics are the simplest which we could make to injure less the Earth. Most companys should worry about the polution, the only thing the majoraty of them can see is Money though. The life in Earth won't end unless another world disaster happen, but we're destroying the way of human being live here. Unfortunately the demages aren't possible to recover, But we can modify and increase the chances that we hav e to survive in a quality life and purê water.

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You don’t need to thank me. As PPaulo mentioned, we are here to help each other. Then there is no point for competition.
I’ll take this opportunity to talk about another important topic: collocations. What are collocations?

http://www.inglesnapontadalingua.com.br ... ngles.html

A free dictionary for you to start writing the collocations down in your notebook:
http://oxforddictionary.so8848.com/search?word=study

More information about it:
http://www.perfect-english-grammar.com/ ... tions.html

http://www.englishleap.com/vocabulary/collocations

You should also learn idioms and phrasal verbs, both are very important in the English language.
Remember: The more you study collocations, idioms and phrasal verbs the better your English will be.
Don’t forget that.
I’m happy to know you are studying.

Keep doing your hard work, and you will become an excellent teacher.
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Avatar do usuário Ancrispa 2555 8 57
(Surely- wrong choice of adverb) Clearly there (are many things going on which harm the nature. –verb tense) have been many things going on which harm nature (don’t use the article the here).

Clearly there have been many things going on which harm nature. (I would ask: which things are you talking about? Show some facts.)


Without natural resources we're incapable (to) of surviving, so we (gotta- don’t use this informal expression with the verb perceive a formal verb: perceber it doesn’t fit here) have to behave differently (ourselves in a diferente way, I mean, everybody ought to do their (own requirements: requisito, exigência – it’s not the word you’re looking for here) share to preserve the environment.

Without natural resources we are incapable of surviving,so we have to behave differently towards nature. I mean, everybody ought to do their share to preserve the environment. For example, putting the trash into the right garbage can helping to promote recycling and raise people’s awareness of the importance of saving water etc.


Putting trash on the right garbage, saving water, etc.

These two topics could (are the simplest which we could make to injure less the Earth- wrong choice of words) simply reduce the negative impact of man’s exploitation on Earth.


Most companies should worry about (the) pollution, the only thing the majority of them can see is Money though.(the adverb though here cannot be used in this way)


Most companies should worry about pollution, but the majority of them only think of money.

(The) Life (in) on Earth( won't end unless another world disaster happen,- this paragraph is very confusing)
( but we're destroying the way of human being live here. )


Life on Earth will end unless we make the transition to
an environmentally sustainable society.


Unfortunately severe damage (no plural form) has already been done ( aren't possible to recover), but we can (modify and ) increase the chances of man’s survival in the world with long-term sustainability policies.( that we have to survive in quality life and pure water.)


Some bullet points to consider:
• Think carefully about what you are going to write;
• Pay attention to grammar rules e.g. abstract nouns: Life is hard (we don’t use the article when we are talking of it in a general way;
• Pay attention to spelling.

Congratulations!
Hello, I'm sorry for taking so long to answer your correction. Thank you, beyond your correction you explain why I need to use that way. I took up to study English in february 2014, I'm trying to become an English teacher and you guys are helping me to perceive my weakness in this language. I must strengthen my grammar, do you know somewhere I could do that ? thanks for all. I hope you keep being this wonderful person.
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Roger
There are many sites that teach English grammar on internet. I’m going to give the ones I know.
If you want to become an English teacher, I’ll give you some piece of advice from what I’ve seen in my life.
These are the steps to take:

First step: Study English grammar hard like it was the most important thing in the whole world;

Second step: Listen to English podcasts to get a perfect pronunciation;
Pronunciation must be your main concern. It’s a huge responsibility to teach students the correct sound of a word. They count on you. You must be sure about it;

Third step: Read newspapers and magazines such as The Guardian, New York times, National Geographic…. You need to build your vocabulary; also read classics such as Dickens…

Fourth step: Have a notebook to write about your daily activities in English, this will help you to develop your writing abilities; the more you read in English the easier will be for you to write;

Fifth step: Practice you speaking on internet, with friends and if it is possible with native speakers.

And now the most valuable piece of advice I’m going to give you:
Never become a lazy teacher. Always search before asking someone.
There are teachers and teachers.
You must choose what kind of teacher you will become.

A lazy teacher who asks stupid questions (I’ve seen many in my life).

A lazy teacher who doesn’t care about his classes and doesn’t study any more (I’ve also seen many in my life).


Even after teaching English for years you will have to learn things.

Good luck!
Read here:
http://blog.chinadaily.com.cn/blog-1354070-30515.html

Grammar websites:
http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary ... phrase.htm

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/grammar/adjectives.htm

https://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar


http://www.perfect-english-grammar.com/ ... t-use.html

http://www.englishleap.com/grammar/prep ... adjectives

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ ... erfect.htm

http://www.englishpage.com/


https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org ... nt-perfect

http://www.eslcafe.com/grammar.html
That's just prove how you are an amazing person Ana. Well dear, I'm listening some podcast every single day, then I repeat ( speaking ) what I've just heard. I'm using two podcast per week, then I exchange for new two podcast, but every day I listen and repeat this two same podcast, all new vocabularies I write down and I memorize them, after I put on aki to make sure that I won't forget anymore. I got praised by americans already and I can practice with some foreigners, my pronunciation ( speaking skills ) is my best. The real problem is in writing and some grammar issues. If I become an English teacher I will keep learning like if I was just a student, trying to improve my pronunciation and learn new words and even improve my grammar, that's my goals. I thank you so much for all these sites and wonderful tips, you're so kind Ana, thanks with all my heart.
greaaaaat <3 more wonderful tips through you ^__^, Of course, I need to thank you, look what you are doing, you are helping me a lot to improve my English. Thanks a lot ;) I write down every correction that you guys are giving to me.
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You're welcome! We are here to help each other.Don't forget that! ;)
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Yep, don´t sweat the small stuff, and let´s move on to the next question/thread/text! ;)
Life goes on.
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