Correção de texto: Foreign country opportunity

You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country. Which country would you like to visit and why?

If I had a opportunity to visit a foreign country, I choose England thus I could to brush up my English skills. Perhaps, I would go to Bournemouth Town, I do like medium cities, who are near of some big city like London. Bournemouth Town is the tourist place where we can have a good life, it is near on the beach, and I can call my English friends on. Luckily, it is not overcrowded, no pollution, a quiet city and it is cheapest living cost than London.
Well, If I went there, I´m sure that I will enjoy, and I will bring a new conversation skills away. Though, I know that I have challenges ahead, this can be a good way to see if I can overcome obstacles alone or with some back English people up, and a good way to see if I can bear up under foreign country pressure. I´m looking forward that one day I will do this travel, and it will be amazing, and give me something a spin new.
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If I had an opportunity to visit a foreign country, I would choose England thus I could brush up my English skills. Perhaps, I would go to Bournemouth Town, I do like medium cities, which are near some big cities like London. Bournemouth Town is the tourist place where we can have a good life, it is near the beach, and I can call my English friends. Luckily, it is not overcrowded, no pollution, a quiet city and the cost of living is lower than in London.
Well, If I went there, I´m sure that I would enjoy it, and I would bring new conversation skills away. Though, I know that I have challenges ahead, this can be a good way to see if I can overcome obstacles alone or with some back English people up, and a good way to see if I can bear up under foreign country pressure. I´m looking forward that one day I will take this trip, and it will be amazing, and give me something a spin new.