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Once upon a time it was a bobcat
. He was sweet and suave
. He didn't have fretfulness
in his mood nor murky
or anything related to band and grim
. He used to hunt only bad animals in the community. This day, he was hunting an armadillo
. He thought it would be easy to catch him as long as he could run faster. And it was so. He found him and ran a few meters until he reached the armadillo
and brought what was inside to the community, so they could eat its guts
. The community was poor and small. After the guts
-lunch, he was going to snooze
. While the bobcat
, 2 cadgers
showed up pleading
for food. He granted
them some. After losing his drowse
, he decided to go hunting once again, but for dinner now.
He caught a limping hart
. The hart
was weak, so it was easy to capture it. He brought the hart
to the community, but told them to wait for the supper
time. Went hunting again, but this time he saw a lynx
. The lynx
was bigger than him, but, fearless, he attacked the it. The bobcat
was very strong, so he could defeat the lynx
. And he did so, but he had his shank
bone broken. He brought the lynx to the community. And satisfied all them in the supper
with the hart and the lynx
he had stopped bleeding, the grief
hadn't gone yet. But everyone thought it was normal due
experiences. At night, while asleep, he felt huge pain. He knew he had to kill that pain, or something bad was gonna happen. He found nothing. So he tried to sleep and did as well.
The other day, bleakness
rounded the community. The so adored and idolized
bobcat had been gone. He did not wake up that morning. So the mayhem
had started. All his bones were put apart
, so they could do a sheaf
of bone-arrows with his bones. And when the quiver
was ready, all cried in sadness.
Life Lesson: people's life are fleeting
, but their memories are forever.