Correção de texto "Prejudice around the word"

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"Prejudice is any kind of discrimination. There is prejudice about many subjects like religion, clothes, culture and race.

Since thousands of years people live in community. They have been practice or suffer different kinds of prejudice. Sometimes, a prejudice has hard consequences.

Last century on the Second word War happened an extermination motivated for prejudice. That happening was called Holocaust. The Holocaust happened in German. Its leader was Adolf Hitler. Hitler belief any people don’t belong from Arian Race would be killed, because Arians were the only pure race. Because of Hitler’s idea, many people died in a cruel situation. A lot of people died with no food and no water, a lot of people suffer pain. They were hurted from Hitler’s soldiers. Each one of those deaths happened to keep Arian race pure.

Besides this happening there are others kinds of prejudice. It’s not unusual to find people complaining about everything. They complain about religion or culture or behavior or any kind of subject. Sometimes that complaining wasn’t just about show their opinions, but can involve prejudice too.

Now a days is common heard about Bullying. That little word has a lot of meanings. Bullying is a prejudice expressing with violence or resentment. This behavior can hurt people from different ways. Some people suffer physic violence and another psychological violence. Sometimes that violence can be a trauma for who suffer it.

Therefore, we need to live keeping out our prejudice to live better in society. Doing this we can make a better word with less violence and more peace."
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"Prejudice is any kind of discrimination. There is prejudice about many subjects like religion, clothes, culture and race.

For thousands of years people have lived in community. They have been practicing or suffering different kinds of prejudice. Sometimes, prejudice has hard consequences.

Last century, during the Second word War , there was an extermination motivated by prejudice. That happening was called Holocaust. The Holocaust happened in Germany. Its leader was Adolf Hitler. Hitler believed any people who didn't belong to the Arian Race would be killed, because Arians were the only pure race. Because of Hitler’s idea, many people died in a cruel situation. A lot of people died with no food and no water, a lot of people suffered pain. They were hurt by Hitler’s soldiers. Each one of those deaths happened to keep the Arian race pure.

Besides this happening, there are other kinds of prejudice. It’s not unusual to find people complaining about everything. They complain about religion or culture or behavior or any kind of subject. Sometimes that complaining isn't just about showing their opinions, but it can involve prejudice too.

Nowadays, it is common to hear about bullying. That little word has a lot of meanings. Bullying is prejudice expressed with violence or resentment. This behavior can hurt people in different ways. Some people suffer physical violence and others psychological violence. Sometimes that violence can be a trauma for those who suffer it.

Therefore, we need to live keeping out our prejudice to live better in a society. By doing this, we can make a better world with less violence and more peace."
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