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So, she came in and told to him something, I don’t have sure what she said, I think she said to him that don’t would put up with treason, he was thinking to break up with her, then after that she said it, he came across with courage and broke up. Actually it brought about such problems to her, but she was a tough girl, she cried, passed out, but after to 2 weeks, she had got over him, and bounced back.

Desde já, agradeço.