Clara was involved in a
custody dispute. Ana claimed to be the biological mother, as the child has her DNA, because the child was generated by her egg and her husband’s sperm, and only used Clara’s womb
for the gestation.
Clara, on the other hand, said the baby was generated in her womb (or uterus)
and she delivered the baby.For this reason, she claims to be the real biological mother
of the baby and she loves
There was a incredible twist, when the biological father of the baby, fell in love with Clara, which deeply affected his marriage
. Now Ana is struggling
to take her husband and child back to her side.
Clara (started- wrong word choice - verb) a custody dispute...
You use the verbs : ask for, claim, demand, fight for, seek, get, have... With the noun dispute.http://oxforddictionary.so8848.com/search?word=custody
(actual – wrong word choice - adjective ) real mother – is the best choice here.http://oxforddictionary.so8848.com/search?word=mother
Was generated in her (belly- wrong word choice - noun) you can use womb or uterus.Congratulations on your creative essay!