Correção de texto: Surrogate Mother 4

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Clara started a custody dispute, and Ana claimed to be the actual mother, as the child has her DNA, because the child was generated by her egg and her husband’s sperm, and Clara only used her womb for the gestation. Clara on the other hand said the baby was generated in her belly and she delivered the baby, for this reason she is the actual mother of the baby and she love him deeply.

There was a incredible twist, when the blood father of the baby, fell in love with Clara, which deeply affected his marriage with Ana, who now struggle to take her husband and child back to her side.

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Clara was involved in a custody dispute. Ana claimed to be the biological mother, as the child has her DNA, because the child was generated by her egg and her husband’s sperm, and only used Clara’s womb for the gestation.
Clara, on the other hand, said the baby was generated in her womb (or uterus) and she delivered the baby.For this reason, she claims to be the real biological mother of the baby and she loves him deeply.

There was a incredible twist, when the biological father of the baby, fell in love with Clara, which deeply affected his marriage. Now Ana is struggling to take her husband and child back to her side.

Explanations:
Clara (started- wrong word choice - verb) a custody dispute...
You use the verbs : ask for, claim, demand, fight for, seek, get, have... With the noun dispute.
Ref. oxforddictionary.so8848
(actual – wrong word choice - adjective ) real mother – is the best choice here.
Ref. oxforddictionary.so8848
Was generated in her (belly- wrong word choice - noun) you can use womb or uterus.

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