Correção de texto: "The Devil Wears Prada"

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Chapter 1: Andrea was looking for a job in a magazine, because she wanted to be a writer. So she sent letters to all the New York’s magazines, and she just got one answer, from one fashion magazine called Runway. She had one interview with a woman called Miranda and she got the job.
Chapter 2: This was the first week of Andrea in her new job. For this time Miranda (Andrea’s buss) wasn’t on the office, she was on holiday. Andrea was instructed by Emily, another girl that works to Miranda, of how to behave and about the peculiar personality of Miranda. For that week Andrea just needed to be ready for Miranda’s calls, because even at vacation Miranda still working.
Chapter 3: The first four weeks in the new job have passed, at this time Miranda was spending her Christmas with her family, in Paris. She called Andrea and asked her to get two copies of a Harry Potter’s book that wasn’t released yet.
Chapter 4: Now Miranda was back to the office. That was the first time Andrea saw her. Miranda didn’t speak much and everybody in the office seemed a bit nervous because of Miranda’s presence. Andrea became responsible to let the design for the next copy of Runway Magazine to Miranda’s place, when she got there she was mistreated by Miranda.
Chapter 5: Andrea didn’t like fancy clothes, but the people at the office started to get bother with that, then they gave her new clothes, and she started to wear it, everybody noticed that.
Chapter 6: Andrea was looking for a new flat at New York, when she finally found it, she moved as soon as she could. Miranda went to spend a couple of days in Paris, but she still calling Andrea to ask for things here and there. Andrea’s job started to affect her personal life, she argument with her best friend Lily and her boyfriend Alex.
Chapter 7: Miranda decided to give a party to the brother of her husband and his future wife. Andrea was invited to that party. There she had to stand behind Miranda and tell her all the names of the guests.
Chapter 8: Emily, an Andrea’s co-worker, called Andrea and told her that she was ill and she can’t go to Paris Fashion Week with Miranda. So Andrea was responsible to go travel with Miranda now. Because of this, Andrea needed to give a break in her relationship with Alex. She arrived in Paris very tired, but she had to work very hard.
Chapter 9: Andrea was at Paris, to work. She discovered that her best friend (Lily) had a car accident and now she is in a dilemma: Did she have to back home, go to see her friend and take the risk to be fired or stand at Paris and make her dreams come true?
Chapter 10: Andrea decided to stay in Paris with Miranda. Andrea felt sad because of her choice, it made decided to get out of this situation. She left Miranda in Paris alone and came back home to see her family and Lily. It drove Miranda crazy.
Epilogue: Now Lily is fine, Andrea is living in her parent’s place, she still trying to be a writer, she didn’t resume her relationship with Alex, but now she is really happy.
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Chapter 1: Andrea was looking for a job in a magazine as she wanted to be a writer. So she sent letters to all the New York’s magazines, and she just got one answer, from a fashion magazine called Runway. She had an interview with a woman called Miranda and she got the job.
Chapter 2: This was the first week of Andrea in her new job. For this time Miranda (Andrea’s buss) wasn’t at the office, she was on holiday. Andrea was instructed by Emily, another girl that works for Miranda, of how to behave and about the peculiar personality of Miranda. For that week Andrea just needed to be ready for Miranda’s calls, because even at vacation Miranda still working.
Chapter 3: The first four weeks in the new job have passed, at this time Miranda was spending Christmas with her family, in Paris. She called Andrea and asked her to get two copies of a Harry Potter’s book that hadn't been released yet.
Chapter 4: Now Miranda was back in the office. That was the first time Andrea saw her. Miranda didn’t speak much and everybody in the office seemed a bit nervous because of Miranda’s presence. Andrea was in charge of letting the design for the next copy of Runway Magazine to Miranda’s place, when she got there she was mistreated by Miranda.
Chapter 5: Andrea didn’t like fancy clothes, but the people at the office started to get annoyed with that, then they gave her new clothes, and she started to wear them, everybody noticed that.
Chapter 6: Andrea was looking for a new flat in New York, when she finally found it, she moved as soon as she could. Miranda went to spend a couple of days in Paris, but she still called Andrea to ask for things here and there. Andrea’s job started to affect her personal life, she argument with her best friend Lily and her boyfriend Alex.
Chapter 7: Miranda decided to give a party to the brother of her husband and his future wife. Andrea was invited to that party. There she had to stand behind Miranda and tell her all the names of the guests.
Chapter 8: Emily, an Andrea’s co-worker, called Andrea and told her that she was ill and she can’t go to Paris Fashion Week with Miranda. So Andrea was responsible to go travel with Miranda now. Because of this, Andrea needed to take a break from her relationship with Alex. She arrived in Paris very tired, but she had to work very hard.
Chapter 9: Andrea was in Paris, to work. She discovered that her best friend (Lily) had a car accident and now she was in a dilemma: Did she have to go back home, go to see her friend and take the risk of being fired or stay in Paris and make her dreams come true?
Chapter 10: Andrea decided to stay in Paris with Miranda. Andrea felt sad because of her choice, it made decided to get out of this situation. She left Miranda in Paris alone and came back home to see her family and Lily. It drove Miranda crazy.
Epilogue: Now Lily is fine, Andrea is living in her parent’s place, she still trying to be a writer, she didn’t get back together with Alex, but now she is really happy.
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Obrigado pela correção Donay, eu fiz esse texto como um trabalho de inglês, eu sei que ficou meio descontextualizado, mas era necessário porque isto não devia ser muito longo. Apreciei muito suas observações, porque as vezes a gente escreve em inglês sem prestar atenção nos detalhes que no fim fazem toda a diferença. ;)