Correção de texto "The election"

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Nelson Mandela spent many years in various campaigns and protests against the apartheid government and also He was the main representative of the anti-apartheid movement.Despite being regarded by the people a man in search of peace and freedom, on the other hand was considered a terrorist by the government that was 27 years in a prision.
However in 1994 Mandela was elected the first black president in south Africa. The election of Mandela as president ended the apartheid.
Nowadays, the country still faces the “social apartheid”, the standard of living between blacks and whites is still very uneven.
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Nelson Mandela spent many years in various campaigns and protests against the apartheid government and he was also the main representative of the anti-apartheid movement. Despite being regarded as a man in search of peace and freedom, he was considered a terrorist by the government andspent 27 years in prision.
However in 1994 Mandela was elected the first black president in South Africa. The election of Mandela as president ended the apartheid.
Nowadays, the country still faces the “social apartheid”, the standard of living between blacks and whites is still very unequal.