Correção de texto: The Violence
Lately, we have been living with a feeling of afraid because the violence in our city, state and country. It is growing up frighteningly and the people live always worried. Sometimes, we prefer stay at home than go out with our family and friends, scared about the news that we see every day.
Our politicians seem like not very interested about this point and don’t work hard for decrease this problem. I think the main reason for this problem is the impunity. Many times we see a person who stole things from other people, who killed someone or committed any other crime and it takes a long time for this person to be arrested and sometimes he even is arrested. The impunity makes the other criminals think it’s easy to commit crimes and not be punished. It creates a domino effect and we are who pay the price.
This is my opinion about this problem and I may not be right but if the justice was a little faster and the impunity wasn’t so big I really think the problem of the violence would be so much smaller than it really is.
Our politicians seem like not very interested about this point and don’t work hard for decrease this problem. I think the main reason for this problem is the impunity. Many times we see a person who stole things from other people, who killed someone or committed any other crime and it takes a long time for this person to be arrested and sometimes he even is arrested. The impunity makes the other criminals think it’s easy to commit crimes and not be punished. It creates a domino effect and we are who pay the price.
This is my opinion about this problem and I may not be right but if the justice was a little faster and the impunity wasn’t so big I really think the problem of the violence would be so much smaller than it really is.
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