Correção de texto: Work for an employer or self employed?

Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business, other prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed work for someone else or own a business ?

As I see it, I rather to bring some work skills away with an employer, because firstly we are rocky worker and we need to brush up our competences. Before, when we have more live experience, we can try to go after our dreams, and pursue an own business high level. If we work for someone else, we should to do what our boss says, we receive less money in most of the times, and we need to account for when we do mistakes, basically, so we eke out a living.
Unlike, when we get an own business we must to be enterprising, and build up an innovation, and that make us more competitive edge over the other companies. Actually, it seems like, people get cold your feet with self-employed, because the challenge is more demanding, some people brush off our ideas, this can make us feeling really bad, and sometimes we only want to drop out of our project, , but we need to bear with threats, and work so badly if we want to achieve our goals, but I thoroughly agree this way, bring independence on us, we got the self-taught and leader skills and bring people opinion around, that can be a good way to get our ideas across.
By the way of conclusion no pain, no gain, the live is pretty tough, and we need to looking forward our future.