Correção para Blue Fox: The black widow

Once upon a timo when I was a little child in my town there was a old widow that everybody get afraid her. This happened because that olf lady is really very ugly and lonely. She lived alone in her big house and she never got out from home. People said the widow had killed her husband and buried him in your backyard. Therefore, everyone called her black widow.
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Once upon a time when I was a little child in my town, there was an old widow that everybody was afraid of. This happened because that old lady was really very ugly and lonely. She lived alone in her big house and she never got out of home. People said the widow had killed her husband and buried him in her backyard. Therefore, everyone called her black widow.