Texto de Portugues para ingles 2

Oi pessoal,

passei um email q eu recbi para o ingles, conferem, plis!

Oi queridos amigos,

Vou comemorar meu aniversario na sexta dia 15/05 , a partir das 22:00 no novo bar.

Segue meu flyer. Mandarei também no orkut. Podem levar quem vocês quiserem.

Ficarei feliz com a presenca de vcs!

bjs
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Hi my dear friends,

On Friday, 14/05, I will celebrate my birthday, from 10pm, in new bar.

Follow my flyer. I will send by orkut too. You can take anybody.

I will happy with your presence.

kiss

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HI there,

Sugestão:

Hi my dear friends:
I will celebrate my birthday, on Friday, on May 14th, from 10p.m. on, at New Bar.
The flyer is attached. I will send by Orkut, too. you can bring whoever you want to the party..
I will be happy with your presence.

Kisses


correct my mistakes, please :D


I hope it helps
dlr
Kelvin's is good, I would just change the last line:

I'll be glad to have you there!

And I don't know about countries other than the US, but in the US we don't usually say goodbye with "hugs" or "kisses" like abraços and beijos. I know that is a way to say goodbye in Brazil, but not here. I would probably just say "Thanks!"