Book Review: Legend Trilogy

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Legend Trilogy by Marie Lu

Imagine a dystopian world where the U.S.A does not exist anymore, but instead, the Republic, that is now ruled by a dictatorship. Please keep going and imagine a world where the distance between the poor and the rich people have never been so big.
This novel is beautiful reflection about the war and It's consequences. It shows two young people, Day and June, growing up with different visions of the world around them and how these views can be changed by an untold truth.
We are presented to this reality throughout the trilogy, full of adventure, anger, fear and love. It is an action-packed reading but at the same time , a really thought-provoking one.
The upshot can be heart-wrenching but I cannot recommend this trilogy highly enough.

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Imagine a DYSTOPIA, where the U.S.A DO not exist anymore, instead; The Republic that now IS UNDER a dictatorship SYSTEM. Please keep going and imagine a world where the distance between the poor and the rich people HAS never been so big.
This novel is A beautiful reflection about the war and ITS consequences. It shows two young people, Day and June, growing up with different visions of the world around them and how these views can be changed by an untold truth.
We are presented to this reality throughout the trilogy, full of adventure, anger, fear and love. It is an action-packed reading but at the same time , IT´S a really thought-provoking one.
The upshot can be heart-wrenching, but I MAY not HIGHLY recommend this trilogy.
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* HIGHLY, talvez fosse melhor substituir por STRONGLY ( não entendi exatamente qual foi a tua intenção no último parágrafo do texto)