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Task: The owner of the school where you study English has decided to make some changes to the school classrooms. He asked for ideas from students about what should be done to make classrooms better places to study in. Write a report making suggestions for how the classrooms could be improved. Write your report. (FCE- Gold coursebook page 221)
Introduction
The aim of this report is to present some useful ideas to bring about some changes to the school classrooms. I interviewed a considerable number of students to find out their views.
Background current situation
The essentials for a good school classroom the school already provides. Each classroom has school desks, blackboard, television and an electronic whiteboard which enhance the quality of the class.
Suggestions
Some of the students suggested that each one should have a computer connected directly to Internet on their desks, because with computers they could:
• Improve their listening skills
• Enrich their speaking abilities reading newspapers and magazines and discussing the main headlines
Other students said that they preferred to have tablets due to its smaller size.
Several students told me that they would like to have dictionaries at their disposal during class time, such as collocations, idioms and phrasal verbs dictionaries.
Another important suggestion made by many of them was to have air conditioning in the classrooms because the windows are too small and the lack of ventilation during the summer is nearly unbearable.
Personal Conclusion
All the ideas seem to be very interesting. I would therefore recommend the use of computers in the classrooms and the installation of an air conditioning system. It seems to be a marvellous improvement in the classrooms.
Task: The owner of the school where you study English has decided to make some changes to the school classrooms. He asked for ideas from students about what should be done to make classrooms better places to study in. Write a report making suggestions for how the classrooms could be improved. Write your report. (FCE- Gold coursebook page 221)
Introduction
The aim of this report is to present some useful ideas to bring about some changes to the school classrooms. I interviewed a considerable number of students to find out their views.
Background current situation
The essentials for a good school classroom the school already provides. Each classroom has school desks, blackboard, television and an electronic whiteboard which enhance the quality of the class.
Suggestions
Some of the students suggested that each one should have a computer connected directly to Internet on their desks, because with computers they could:
• Improve their listening skills
• Enrich their speaking abilities reading newspapers and magazines and discussing the main headlines
Other students said that they preferred to have tablets due to its smaller size.
Several students told me that they would like to have dictionaries at their disposal during class time, such as collocations, idioms and phrasal verbs dictionaries.
Another important suggestion made by many of them was to have air conditioning in the classrooms because the windows are too small and the lack of ventilation during the summer is nearly unbearable.
Personal Conclusion
All the ideas seem to be very interesting. I would therefore recommend the use of computers in the classrooms and the installation of an air conditioning system. It seems to be a marvellous improvement in the classrooms.
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