Correção de texto: My last vacation

On my last vacation, in january, I went to the beach in Rio de Janeiro city. It was amazin to stay there enjoying with my family and friends. It was very warm on the city. I enjoyed a lot, in the hotel. I went swimming on the sea, and walking on the sand. I stayed there ten days. I want to go there in other time.
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On my last vacation, in january, I went to the beach in Rio de Janeiro city. It was amazin to stay there enjoying with my family and friends. It was very warm on the city. I enjoyed a lot, in the hotel. I went swimming on the sea, and walking on the sand. I stayed there ten days. I want to go there in other time.


Last January during my vocation I went to the beach in Rio de Janeiro. It was amazing to be there enjoying with my family and friends. It was a very hot day, I enjoyed a lot the hotel. I went for a swim in the sea, followed by a relaxing walk along the beach. I stayed there for ten days. I'd like to go back there another time.


Peace!