Correção de Texto: Story of Stuff

Have you already thought about how much we are consumers?

Today I watched a video named "Story of Stuff". It made me think a lot about the world we'll leave for the next generations and why we shop so much goods that we don't even need.

I suggest you watch this video too, its link is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3c88_Z0FF4k, and you can start to think about this theme.

Can someone review my writing?

Thank you.

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Avatar do usuário Redseahorse 8000 1 13 143
Have you EVER thought about how much we are consumers?
Today I watched a video named "Story of Stuff". It made me think a lot about the world THAT we'll leave for the next generations and why we shop so MANY goods that we don't even need.
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Thanks Redseahorse, but I have a question.
In the phrase "the world THAT we'll leave" the word "THAT" is necessary?
Avatar do usuário Redseahorse 8000 1 13 143
Sim,

Na linguagem padrão culta, o pronome relativo THAT deve ser sempre usado, todavia numa conversação mais informal, ele pode ser omitido sem problema!
Thanks