Correção de Texto: Talking about Narcos
- LuanBR
- Membro desde: 10 Abr 2017, 14:28
- Perfil · 4 Mensagens
Could you please correct this?
I'd like to talk about Narcos. In this last week I had finished the third season. I'm a really impressed about that serie, that was a such great serie, really. I have to admit I missed Wagner Moura in that season, cause he was great in first and second season, but there were other great actors, too. On and off, when I was watching it, I used to stop that to looking for the real characters. In that season, he talked about Callí Cartel, one of the biggest Cocaine producers of the world. It's so hard to believe that everything told is really. I'm kind of sad, cause I have to wait until next year to see the fourth season, but I think it will be worth.
You otta see that serie.
Now I'm looking forward to seeing the next season of Stranger Things, I love it too.
I'd like to talk about Narcos. In this last week I had finished the third season. I'm a really impressed about that serie, that was a such great serie, really. I have to admit I missed Wagner Moura in that season, cause he was great in first and second season, but there were other great actors, too. On and off, when I was watching it, I used to stop that to looking for the real characters. In that season, he talked about Callí Cartel, one of the biggest Cocaine producers of the world. It's so hard to believe that everything told is really. I'm kind of sad, cause I have to wait until next year to see the fourth season, but I think it will be worth.
You otta see that serie.
Now I'm looking forward to seeing the next season of Stranger Things, I love it too.
AMPLIANDO O VOCABULÁRIO
2 respostas
- Redseahorse
- Localização: Brazil
- Membro desde: 26 Jan 2015, 14:13
- Perfil · 26.3k Pontos · 3.1k Mensagens
Sugestão de texto (já revisado)
"I'd like to talk about Narcos.
Last week, I finished its third season. I'm really impressed by those series; they were such great series, really!
I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in that season because he was great in the first and second seasons, although there were some other great actors, too. On and off, when I was watching it, I used to stop that to look for the real characters. In that season, the plot was about the Cali Cartel, one of the biggest cocaine producers in the world. It's so hard to believe that everything told was real. I'm kind of sad because I have to wait until next year to see the fourth season, but I think it will be worth it."
"I'd like to talk about Narcos.
Last week, I finished its third season. I'm really impressed by those series; they were such great series, really!
I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in that season because he was great in the first and second seasons, although there were some other great actors, too. On and off, when I was watching it, I used to stop that to look for the real characters. In that season, the plot was about the Cali Cartel, one of the biggest cocaine producers in the world. It's so hard to believe that everything told was real. I'm kind of sad because I have to wait until next year to see the fourth season, but I think it will be worth it."
- PPAULO
- Localização: Rio de Janeiro-Brazil
- Membro desde: 22 Fev 2013, 02:49
- Perfil · 78.4k Pontos · 15.4k Mensagens
Last week I finished its third season. I'm really impressed by that series; it was such great series, really!
I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in that season because he was great in the first and second seasons, although there were some other actors with awesome (good/stellar/first-class) performances as well.
Here to avoid the repetition of "great" time after time. "Too" at the end of the paragraph would be fine, I replaced by "as well" just for add a bit of new (imaginative and unconventional), that is somehow to build vocab and to make the writer to get new words (out of the box) to express that.
I have to admit that I missed Wagner Moura in that season because he was great in the first and second seasons, although there were some other actors with awesome (good/stellar/first-class) performances as well.
Here to avoid the repetition of "great" time after time. "Too" at the end of the paragraph would be fine, I replaced by "as well" just for add a bit of new (imaginative and unconventional), that is somehow to build vocab and to make the writer to get new words (out of the box) to express that.
TESTE DE VOCABULÁRIO