Correção de texto: The great lunch

guihgf
Hello my friends.

Anybody help me please? This is a very simple text:

Today I was very hungry, because I arrived to launch at 14:00PM.
At launch today had: rice, bean, pork chop, cassava, salad with tomato,
green beans, lettuce, cucumber, salt, pepperm zucchini and rep pepper.
Beyond this banquet had to barbecue with sausage, beef and manioc(seria a farofa).
The dessert was: Napolitan Ice Cream, caremelized banana and chocolote cake.
I never ate so much in my entire life.

Thanks.
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Rakell Grubert Pere 3 6 66
Where did you get the text? Is it yours?
gian2hard 1 7 51
guihgf escreveu:Hello my friends.

Anybody help me please? This is a very simple text:

Today I was very hungry, because I arrived at 14:00PM for lunch.
We had many different foods, rice, beans, pork chop, cassava, salad with tomato
green beans, lettuce, cucumber, salt, pepperm zucchini and rep pepper.
On top of that we had a barbecue, with sausage, beef and manioc(seria a farofa).
For dessert we had Neapolitan Ice Cream, caramelized banana and chocolote cake.
I never ate so much in my entire life.

Thanks.
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guihgf
Can we use other expression instead of "on top of that"?
Marcio_Farias 1 23 214
14:00PM não parece adequado. Sugiro "2 p.m."
Rakell Grubert Pere 3 6 66
Today, I had my lunch at 2pm, what I usually don't do, and because of that I was extremly hungry, so, I ate a lot. Rice and beans, pork chop, cassava and salad with tomato and lettuce seasoned with salt and pepper (how about vinegar and olive oil?),pepperm zuchini( is it salt and pepper zuchini? )and red pepper(how about stuffed red pepper?).To top it of, I had beef( I prefer a steak) with barbacue sausage and "farofa"(there isn't anything similar in english, so I suggested using the word in portuguese).For dessert, I had Neapolitan Ice Cream, caramelized banana and chocolate cake.
Never in my life, have I eaten so much!
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guihgf
Thanks my friends, this forum is amazing.
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