Correção do texto "e-mail sobre amigos"

Bem amigos tenho uma composição e gostaria que dessem uma olhada para ver se está ok.
Obrigado desde já!

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Hi Stephanie,
Thanks for your e-mail.

Of course I can tell you about my friend Roberto. He's 33, and He's a great photographer!
He's quite extrovert and very sociable, he has lots of friends. He's quite good with children. He's married and has one daughter. He has one brother and one sister and He's the other of them.
He's very hard-working, responsible and a great work in team.
Sometimes we go out to take a lot of photos with our photographer’s friends. He likes listening to music, but not forró or pagode. And He's very independent, so you won't have to look after him.
Him parents are married and he lives with his wife and daughter.
The only negative things I can think of are that He's a quite selfish, because He doesn't like to borrow his things.
I hope that's useful to you. If you need any more information about him, say to me!

Love
Cesar
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Obrigado!