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Hi,

My weekend was amazing.
On Saturday morning, I went to Portobello market with 3 friends, there are many stores that I loved! I bought 3 dresses, each one per 15 pounds. This is a heaven.

On Afternoon, I did a movie with these friends, my friend, Rodrigo is a artist plastic (or artcrafts?), and a he has a studio tattoo in London, I did this movie to put in his website.
The recorded was in Portobello too. Is was very great!

After this, I got the bus to Oxford Circus to see the city.

On Sunday, there was my birthday party in my friend's house. There was a lot of people there. I made carrot cake, It was amazing! It had finished quick!
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My weekend was amazing.

On Saturday morning, I went to the Portobello market with 3 friends where there are many stores that I loved! I bought 3 dresses, each one per 15 pounds. This is a heaven.

In the afternoon, I made a movie with these friends. My friend Rodrigo is a plastic artist and he has a tattoo studio in London; I made this movie for his website and it was shot in Portobello too. It was awesome!

After that, I got the bus to Oxford Circus to visit the city.

On Sunday, there was my birthday party at my friend's house. There were a lot of people there. I made carrot cake and it was amazing! It finished quickly!