Correção de texto "My first essay"

migueltkdrio
Hi, I study english by myself, I understand listen and reading well, however, my writing and speaking is poor. So I decide pratice this habilities. I like you help me to correct the whole topic, include this one I have just wrote.


First Essay

Every day I get home, the first thing I do is take a shower. After that I like to make my dinner.
The favorite food I have for dinner is kidney of Rhinos, this one is delicious.
I also like pudding for dessert, however yesterday I put two kilos, now I am 78 kilos.
I really eat like a Rhino.





Thanks for help.
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Donay Mendonça 60545 21 100 1466
Migueltkdrio,


Sugestões de melhoria para seu texto:

Every day, when I get home, the first thing I do is to take a shower. After that, I like to make dinner.
The favorite food I have for dinner is Rhino kidney: this one is delicious.
I also like pudding for dessert. However, yesterday I put on two kilos. Now I weigh 78 kilos. I really eat like a Rhino.


Bem Vindo Ao Fórum!

migueltkdrio
Obrigado pela correção, Donay.

dlr 85
Você come rhino??

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