Correção de texto "My first essay"

Hi, I study english by myself, I understand listen and reading well, however, my writing and speaking is poor. So I decide pratice this habilities. I like you help me to correct the whole topic, include this one I have just wrote.


First Essay

Every day I get home, the first thing I do is take a shower. After that I like to make my dinner.
The favorite food I have for dinner is kidney of Rhinos, this one is delicious.
I also like pudding for dessert, however yesterday I put two kilos, now I am 78 kilos.
I really eat like a Rhino.





Thanks for help.