Michelle Obama and Women's human rights

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Michelle Obama not is only the first African-American to be the First Lady of the United States as is also an American lawyer and writer, graduated in major US universities ,Harvard and Princeton.
In several speeches Lady Michelle shows her struggle for Women's human rights, which is something that over the years achieved many achievements, but still a long way to go.
In the last 100 years women have come in search of equality rights enters women and men, today women can vote, apply for key positions until even to study. The role of women today has changed, they are no longer just housewives or puppets for men, women today are businesswomen and nowadays women can work.
Women show today as we are able and we have the same abilities of men, but of course that is there is still a great way for to stop the discrimination that still exists, so we women can live without fear and without the need to please anyone but just ourselves.